P5 & M4 & D1

My first Radio advert

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERRfsqQMGK0&feature=youtu.be

Client feedback

Hammer Glass cleaner advert

Voice over

The voice over is not great and is not rally what I am looking for, Instead of a deep voice I would prefer if you could provide a voice that is more high pitched but still male so that it matches the background music more as the music is rather upbeat.

Background music

The background music is good its happy and upbeat which is what I want the advertisement to be seen as so that listeners put that upbeat happiness in the advert with the product.

Sound effects

The sound effects are excellent for the product they all convey the product well and make it easy to know what effect they product will give and how well it will work.

Feedback

Because of the feedback I received on my first advert I have decided to change things such as I have now changed the voice to the more high pitched and confident voice instead of the more deep voice as the higher pitched voice sounds more calm and matches well with the happy upbeat background music so it brings the advert more together conveying a happy atmosphere from the advert.


My updated radio advert

https://youtu.be/Sq0kOrjuXaE